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3WW - 12

May 7, 2008 by Red

human death abound
i am cautious where i step
maybe it’s just rot.

Posted in 3WW, D'oh, Poetry, Things I hate, Uncategorized | 10 Comments

10 Responses to “3WW - 12”

on May 7, 2008 at 8:21 am1 pia

Rot is better than death I guess

I dunno. They both stink
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 8:50 am2 ozymandiaz

or politics

OOohhh, perhaps!
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 8:58 am3 teeni

Eww. I think you are becoming a horror writer! This was really good though.

I think not It came outta left field for me, not really my “style” I suppose, but I like it.
Thanks!
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 9:49 am4 gautami tripathy

I think death is better than rot..

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/05/packing-my-bags-3ww.html

Think so? I’d rather deal with neither.
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 10:29 am5 purefnevyl

You are getting good at these. Nice very nice.

I do appreciate that, MistaEvyl .. I bow down to your Haiku abilities
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 11:22 am6 whypaisley

very nice,, so many implications…..

That’s what I aimed for.
Thanks!
Red
on May 7, 2008 at 12:23 pm7 Greybeard

I like it and not just because I have three dogs.

I like it because I have dogs
red
on May 7, 2008 at 1:37 pm8 TC

Ewww, that was gross!

*wrinkled nose*

(Very creative though.)

yeah, I thought so too
Red
on May 8, 2008 at 8:54 pm9 trailerparkbarbie

Maybe, it’s rotten dogshit. EWWWWW

Perhaps - I dont wanna step in it!
Red
on May 9, 2008 at 3:56 pm10 pieceofpie

oh geez, im thinking of that movie with robin williams where his wife commits suicide b/c their children died… ummm…what dreams may come… thaz the name of it… afterlife.. death, life… all that sorta stuff… excellent btw…

Yikes! so much ..
Red