Where I’m From - my version
May 9, 2008 by Red
Have you ever read the poem, “Where I’m From” by George Ella Lyon? You should.
And then you should write you own version of that poem. Thousands of people have sifted through their memories, and delivered beautiful works of poetry by following the “guideline” to writing their own “Where I’m From” poem. I did it several years back, and I’m reposting it now because I had recently found some wonderful pieces by folks on the Internet. You can search for ‘em, there are tons floating around.
It’s a thought-provoking “assignment” and I just know that some of y’all could do wonders with it. You ought to give it a try, see what you come up with.
The guideline, for if you decide to participate:
1. I am from _______ (specific ordinary item), from _______ (product name) and _______.
2. I am from the _______ (home description… adjective, adjective, sensory detail).
3. I am from the _______ (plant, flower, natural item), the _______ (plant, flower, natural detail).
4. I am from _______ (family tradition) and _______ (family trait), from _______ (name of family member) and _______ (another family name) and _______ (family name).
5. I am from the _______ (description of family tendency) and _______ (another one).
6. From _______ (something you were told as a child) and _______ (another).
7. I am from _______ (representation of religion, or lack of it).
Further description
8. I am from _______ (place of birth and family ancestry), _______ (two food items representing your family).
9. From the _______ (specific family story about a specific person and detail), the _______ (another detail, and the _______ (another detail about another family member).
10. I am from _______ (location of family pictures, mementos, archives and several more lines indicating their worth).
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And, of course, my version of “Where I’m From”.
I am from record players, art supplies and tire swings. I am from GI Joes, classic Care Bears and flannel sheets.
I am from the Sunshine State, from sugar cane and pineapple fields. I am from the beaches on the Pacific Ocean and a dysfunctional military home with high expectations and alcoholism.
I am from the bird of paradise, hibiscus plants, sweet-smelling gardenia bushes and budding dogwoods.
I am from an Irish temper, German beer and English bulldogs. I am from redneck country with green, rolling hills and pigeon speaking haolis.
I am from air craft carriers, helicopters and F-14s. I am from lonely afternoons after school and tear-filled good-byes.
I am from Julia, Joyce and Johnny. I am from amazing people whom I never got the chance to meet, though the stories of them intrigue me greatly. I am from homemade fudge that was always made without a recipe and measuring supplies, quilt racks and White Lightning.
I am from fish fries, camping along Kentucky Lake and fun-filled road trips.
I am from the Methodist church, and though I don’t represent like I should, I still have my own relationship with God.
I am from tales of life on the sea, fresh vegetables every night and cooking my first Thanksgiving at the age of 12. I am from Christmas phone calls to Kentucky while wearing shorts on the North Shore.
I am from Florida and the west coast, where a good bye to friends was always around the corner. I am from hurricanes, earthquakes, mud slides and tornadoes.
I am from teri beef and sticky rice.
I am from Air Force drop outs who met by chance signing up for the Navy. I am from people that broke their backs for pennies just to feed their youngins.
I am from a man who smiled with his eyes, laughed from his gut and loved from within. I am from a man who I wish I could have met but was called to God too soon.
I am from a cedar chest that reminds me of hard work well spent, a closet full of shot guns and a shiny revolver, a 58 Chevy, and a room full of framed Rockwells and paintings by Salvador Dali.
I am from love, laughter and living like there is no tomorrow . . .
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Good luck!


Wow Red! Your poem is awesome and what a wonderful idea. I came across the original a year ago but never thought to run with it on my own. I’ll post mine to my page ASAP. Feel free to drop by and check it out.
Cool! Yes, do one .. it’d be great to read!
I’ll definitley be on my way over1
Red
I aboslutely love your version!
Aw, thank you, thank you very much! It wasn’t easy to do, though it may seem so. It brings up many memories.
Red
This is great. The last line is my favorite.
Thanks, I like it too!
I have a feeling that if you did this, it would be out of this frickin’ world, because you have lived sister. You have stories out the yingyang, and I think they’d make for a most excellent poem.
Red
that is absolutely AWESOME!!! you inspire me so much with your expression.. just love it!
Thank you, MsReggie.
I hope ive inspired you to do it, as well
Red
Red, that was really quite beautiful and so uniquely you. I love when you write poetry, your soul was meant for it.
Love,
Annie
Aw, that means so much coming from you, Annie. Im humbled.
Red
Will have to look at this when I’m awake, as I’m just about ready to pass out.
But before I’m off to bed, just wanted to say hi and hope your injury is all better now.
And yes, your version is great! Thanks for sharing.
Aww! Thank you so much for checking in on me . .that is sweeet!!
Im doing fine, now!
Thank you for the props!
Red
Loev that version
Many thanks, Kaylee!
Red
Howdy Red. I just popped in to wish you a very Merry Mother’s Day.
Poetry freaks me out, I’m out of here.
hahhaha! Dont be too freaked out. it wont hurt.
Thanks, Mr P. That was awfully sweet of you!
Red
Oh my gosh Red, this is ABSOLUTELY amazing! Shhhooooot girl! I loved reading the poem that you made! This is a keeper, what a way to put your past (and childhood) into one place with fond memories….
This will take me a while, I’m very slow at these sorts of things and wonder if I can do it at all. I think yours is just fantastic, “I am from tales of life on the sea, fresh vegetables every night and cooking my first Thanksgiving at the age of 12. I am from Christmas phone calls to Kentucky while wearing shorts on the North Shore.”
Red, will you PLEASE consider adopting me? I wanna come and live with you!
Aww .. thank you so much
I know you can do this .. it took me several days to complete it, but it’s well worth it. It’s a thinking one, makes you put your thinking cap on..
Come on down!!
And yes, I would totally adopt you
Red
Oh my…that is just…beautiful! You truly have a way with words. I’d love to try this but I’m not sure I’m up to putting my thinking cap on right now. Ha. For me to get all the words out and have them flow is not an easy task. I’m not a writer and I have to force it out!
Aw, go on! No, really . .go on
You really write beautifully, but maybe some day ..
Red
Good job. I will work on mine and get back to you.
Coool! Can’t wait to read it.
Red